I really love the story book feel of this and how each scene has its own art. It's definitely a lot of work, but the end result is very beautiful! The soundtrack is so soothing and the art is beautiful.
As Amberbaum mentioned, the text is little buggy and sometimes doesn't appear at all. I also feel like some endings could've been merged together as they were the same, but told things differently or went in more detail. Other than that, I love the story a lot and the characters are so cute.
Keep going on, I'm excited to see what you do in future!
Hopefully with the updated version, the text issues should be resolved now. Thank you for the kind review! I really enjoyed making lots of scenes for this storybook style, I'll try to be quicker with my next project haha.
This is really cute. Sadly the text is buggy. It sometimes appears in a page and then not. You have to try multiple times to be able to read everything.
I've updated the engine this was running on, so hopefully the buggy text isn't an issue anymore... Thank you for playing, I'm glad you thought it was cute!
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I really love the story book feel of this and how each scene has its own art. It's definitely a lot of work, but the end result is very beautiful! The soundtrack is so soothing and the art is beautiful.
As Amberbaum mentioned, the text is little buggy and sometimes doesn't appear at all. I also feel like some endings could've been merged together as they were the same, but told things differently or went in more detail. Other than that, I love the story a lot and the characters are so cute.
Keep going on, I'm excited to see what you do in future!
Hopefully with the updated version, the text issues should be resolved now. Thank you for the kind review! I really enjoyed making lots of scenes for this storybook style, I'll try to be quicker with my next project haha.
This is really cute. Sadly the text is buggy. It sometimes appears in a page and then not. You have to try multiple times to be able to read everything.
I've updated the engine this was running on, so hopefully the buggy text isn't an issue anymore... Thank you for playing, I'm glad you thought it was cute!